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It all started when Noah woke up on Monday morning at his house to go to school.
His father says, "Noah, food is ready." It surprised Noah, because usually his father comes upstairs and wakes up his little brother Ben, and then he checks on Noah.
“Good morning,” Noah said. “Why didn’t you wake Ben up?”
“I wanted to speak to you about it.” Noah’s dad explains that Ben is sick, and he doesn’t know if Ben has COVID or the flu, but he has to go to the hospital to check if he is OK. So, Noah’s dad tells him he will have to stay at Ashley’s house after school. Noah is afraid of going to her house, but he is worried about his brother.
Later, after school, Noah shivers in fear and trudges up to Ashley’s house. Noah and Ashly were best friends in 6th grade, but Ashly thought Noah was childish. They never saw one another again after she made new friends. Noah’s parents knew this, but they sent him to Ashley’s house anyway because they were the only people that were around to watch him. Noah took a deep breath and knocked. It was her mom, Elizabeth.
Mrs. Elizabeth said: “Oh, Hi Noah, it’s been so long. Come on in. Ashley is upstairs.” She hugs him.
Noah walks to Ashley’s room and says, “Hi Ashley, how are you?”
She said, “Oh, hi Noah, I didn’t see you there.” it surprised Ashley that Noah was here; She never expected to see him again.
Noah asked Ashley where he should sit down.
Ashley said, “You can sit down on my bed.” They sat on the bed together. Nobody said anything for a few minutes.
Ashley spoke up and said, “Look, I am sorry I left you alone. I wanted to make new friends, but I started missing you more and more. Noah, I am sorry. I will never do that again. Can you please forgive me?”
Then Noah said, “Of course I forgive you, but it hurt my feelings about what you did back then. So thanks, it means a lot that you apologized.
Ashley says “You’re welcome. Do you want to be friends again?” Noah says, “No, I want to be best friends.”
In the end, Noah’s father comes home, and Ashley’s mom says, “Hi Kris, the kids are upstairs.”
Noah’s father walks upstairs to Ashley’s room, and, to his surprise, he notices Noah and Ashley talking and having fun. He was scared that Ashley would say bad words to Noah, but they were having fun, so he was impressed and glad. Then Noah’s dad says,
“Hi, kids. I am so happy you are working together and having fun”. And then everybody hugs each other.