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The writer is trying to improve cohesion in the paragraph below. Which words or phrases would best connect the ideas presented?
Some advocates of mandatory uniforms believe uniforms will curb bullying.
(However, instead, consequently, or in addition to) research conducted by the University of Texas notes that mandatory uniforms do not significantly impact bullying among students. (to the contrary, consequently, additionally, or similarly???) the research went on to note that when schools promote uniforms as a deterrent to bullying it harms students emotionally by saying being an individual
attracts unwanted attention.
(on the other hand, however, finally or therefore?) if mandatory uniform advocates were really concerned about the well-being of students, they should be tackling uniform retailers and their outrageous prices that create larger financial burdens for families.