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I had a project about Lord of the Flies, I had to draw a shirt that could be sold for the promotion of the book. Aside from that, I had to write one paragraph explaining the shirt.
My paragraph:
To make my shirt, I reread important parts of Lord of the Flies to get ideas on what to draw. The scene where Jack cuts a pig’s head and offers it to the beast as a gift was very powerful, so I decided to include the dead boar in the shirt. Jack and his tribe are scared of the beast and believe that the beast will leave them alone if they give it gifts. What the boys don’t know is that the beast they’re worshiping is actually the evil inside each of them. Taking this information, I concluded that the quote best to capture the essence of Lord of the Flies was "Maybe there is a beast.. Maybe it’s only us" by Simon. Another important symbol I decided to use was Piggy’s broken glasses, to represent his death and how the other boys lost their rationality and civilization.

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