In conclusion most people think that the more people have cars is better, it is not the case all the time because there are advantages and disadvantages. Public transportation also has advantages and disadvantages. There are three reasons for use of public transportation one advantage and two disadvantages, one advantage is faster commutes and two disadvantages are it can be crowded and long wait times.


Can you show me a proper way to write the paragraph I have above because someone said One thing you could add to the way end of this chunk would be restating your claim/main idea in the last sentence. But don’t for get to use other words to like this:

Don’t: Public transportation

Do: That is why public transformation has its ups and downs