Life is full of various events, moments, memories, and experiences. I would like to share my experiences in life; my name is Tigist Ademre, and I am 19 years old. I am from Addis Ababa. I never thought that I would get admitted to Bahir Dar University. I was excited, but at the same time, I was so nervous since it was my first time feeling apart from my family and friends. Still, I wanted to give it a try, so I am here now. Actually, college life is much harder than high school life. Here, I experienced some personal distress since I have no one here. It is not a comfortable place to live; the weather conditions are really hot, and the water is salty, so I can't even take a bath. I don't even think about drinking water, and I won't mention what we eat, but I can't say that there are no good things. I started to think about my future since I am not with my family; I have the freedom to do anything I want, but I have to think about the consequences.




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