Read this excerpt from a student's speech to their
school's Parent-Teacher Association. Which comment
provides the most effective feedback for this excerpt?
O You should include images of the items or a chart to
quantify the items.
O Your language and tone are disrespectful and risk
offending people.
O You should describe the different kinds of students
who use the science lab.
O Your suggestions are timid and won't do anything to
solve this outrageous problem