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WILL MARK BRAINLIEST
PLEASE help make this poem sound better!

The rain is like a waterfall
Sometimes it comes down hard
And you can barely see at all
Your bright and sunny day
May be pushed away by the rainclouds
The sky is crying
And the children are sighing
But they already know
what comes out of rain
Is a beautiful rainbow



these are the requirements

" Use rhyme scheme or meter.
" Use at least two examples of figurative language, including (but not limited to) simile, metaphor, or allusion.
" Be written in a form that is appropriate given the topic you select.

Respuesta :

Original:
The rain is like a waterfall 
Sometimes it comes down hard
And you can barely see at all
Your bright and sunny day
May be pushed away by the rainclouds 
The sky is crying
And the children are sighing
But they already know
what comes out of rain 
Is a beautiful rainbow


New version:
The rain is like a waterfall
It may come down hard
Seeming like a veil
The wonderful, bright day
Will be pushed away
The sky is crying
The children are sighing
But they have a drop of hope
That after the storm
There comes a rainbow

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