You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers. After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view. Which choice is the best answer?


A: There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.

B: After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

C: A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.

D: Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

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Answer:

B: After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

Explanation:

The original sentence is saying that the tree went for a walk, which is wrong.

Revision B fixes the problem of a dangling or misplaced modifier.

Options C and D have the same problem as the original sentence. They still claim that it was a tree that "went for a long walk in the hot sun."

Answer:

B

Explanation:

Trees cant walk they are living but a tree has roots which grow underground that take all the proteins for the plant if they are stuck in one place how can they walk the roots make it impossible for them but if a hurricane comes then maybe because of the wind they can fly all the trees have to do is say "I believe I can fly". Simple right. Trees can hack ya too they can give you pc a virus. Ok this whole thing was a joke but its B.