Its good but are you like writing this for a grade? If you are I wouldn't use capital letters and I definitely wouldn't say sksksk a hundred times. If you aren't writing it for a grade and you are writing it for fun it is pretty good I like it.
I think the only problem is that when you say VSCO you might mean VISCO. Forgive me if I am wrong and you actually mean VSCO. Grammarly says your paper is fine and I read it. It looks fine to me! :)
