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My best day where I was happy I was at Disney world.<<< topic sentence. I went to Disney World, and it was amazing there fire works, Disney princeses, Mickey Mouse and more it was amazing! The rides were extraordinary skimming the water after a big drop and going back up for yet another drop! The food after the activities was amazing we were in a Star Wars themed reastaraunt and everything looked bizarre but smelled GREAT. <<< 3 sentences
Everything was delicious, I had such a great time that day I marked it as my best. <<< closing sentence
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