Answer:
Here's the new and improved essay. I made sure to add the literary devices.
Step-by-step explanation:
My mom said that this is the last time I can help you because she needs me to focus on my own priorities even if I say I want to do it on my freetime shes saying that I can't do homework for people, because she says I'm helping them cheat and I'm giving them a bad example. I'm really sorry. I hope this essay works out for you.
