HELP!! Is this poem okay for english!! I have to find a poem about my feelings! What do you think??
She doesn't understand her beauty inside so she cries. All the tears that fall from her eyes. And the pain she tries to hide. A few know about her thought. And the scars on her body from people who taunt. She wants to stop her only relief, but with all the grief she feels within it's harder to stop then it is to begin. Her parents don't understand, and so they shout and make her feel even more worthless and full of doubt. She tried to explain a thousand times but is never able to find what will make them listen instead of fight. So this poem is ending, let's all find an out to quit from the sharp tools across our skin and hopefully you will notice the beauty within.