Dave received an A on his essay.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?
(A) The lines that make up an A were written on Dave’s essay at the top of his paper.

(B) Dave hoped to receive an A on his essay, and it turned out he did receive the A he wanted.
(C) When Dave’s essay was returned to him by Mrs. Capri, he saw an A written at the top.
(D) The crisp, sharp lines of an A were etched in thick blue marker at the top of Dave’s essay.