Please let me know what you think! This is for a project and I need some different perspectives on it! Thank you! ^<^
(It is really short, but I think its sufficient for conveying the emotions. If it is already answered, please leave a comment)

~You Are~


By; Jacob Odom


Like poetry, you are sophisticated

Like clockwork, you are unique

Like nature, you are beautiful

Like deep space, you are mysterious

Like the ocean, you are elegant

Like a bird, your voice is unlike any other

Like the sun, you are new each morning

Like the moon, you are there in the darkest hour

Like the stars in the sky, you are full of wonder

Like the storybook, you are full of adventure

Like the sound of symphony, you are a story unfolding

Like you, there is no one else
~

Respuesta :

Answer:

That is great! One thing you might want to change though is changing the beginnings of some of the stanzas so they are not just starting with like!