Read the sentence.

The fake, counterfeit money, which isn't valid, was discovered in the crime investigation.

What is the best way to revise this sentence to eliminate wordiness?
The money is not valid because it was counterfeit and discovered in the crime investigation.
The counterfeit money was discovered in the crime investigation.
Discovered in the crime investigation, the counterfeit money was fake.
The sentence is correct as written.

Respuesta :

Answer: B. The counterfeit money was discovered in the crime investigation.

Explanation:

The words fake, counterfeit and isn't valid are all referring to the same meaning. A better sentence should read: "The fake money was found during the investigation."

How do reword a wordy sentence?

The best way to go about rewording a sentence that has too many words is:

  • check for and eliminate obvious repetitions. This may be repeated words, two or more phrases that have the same meaning, etc.

  • check to remove words whose absence does not reduce the meaning of the sentence nor improve it. An example of such a word from the question is the word "Crime". It is known to all that investigations usually happen when there is a crime. Hence there is no need to include it.

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