Revise the sentence to state the meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and
clauses.
a.
In our company there are wide-open opportunities for professional growth with a company that enjoys an enviable record for
stability in the dynamic atmosphere of aerospace technology.
In our company we offer stable opportunities for professional growth in the field of aerospace
technology.
b. If a person is looking for opportunities for professional growth in the field of aerospace technology,
our company provides a stable working environment.
c. Our company provides opportunities for professional growth and stability in the dynamic field of
aerospace technology.
d. none of these
