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Prompt

You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the scholarship
You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that
Significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a solid
prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants.

Respuesta :

An important event in life that changed me was the birth of my younger sibling.

  • I am the eldest child and I have two siblings who were ten and five years respectively when my mother was pregnant again. My dad works in a clothing company and leaves home very early and comes back at night.

  • My mother was pregnant and I was fifteen years old then. On the day of the delivery, I was the only one at home with her, I followed her to the hospital. I could see the pain that she was going through.

  • When we got to the hospital, the doctor attended to her and she gave birth. My father later came to check her and we were all happy. I learned a lesson that day. I learned about the pain that mothers pass through during childbirth and I vowed that I will always cherish and respect women. I realized that hurting the feelings of one's parents or wife isn't good.

  • Furthermore, after the incident, I want to become a medical doctor. I realized that I want to put smiles on the faces of people and make them happy. Since that incident, I am also kinder now and have a better character.

  • I am grateful for that moment as it has shaped me into becoming a better person.

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