I had to write a poem for one of my classes and I just wanted some feedback...

Rate it 1-10. Easy pts, & will give Brainliest! :)


Love is caring, and LOVE is the only thing needed in such a cruel world we live in.


Sad truth is, we don't seem to understand yet what LOVE truly is. How can this be?


We're losing faith, hope, while at the same time falling out of love as time passes by.


Looking at the stars thinking, why do we choose hatred over kindness?


I've heard many stories; people that are lost and going through hard times. Some end their lives, judged by those they want to compare to.


Different is what makes us beautiful though. And we shouldn't be fighting these battles in our heads ALONE.


ALL burdens, ONLY God can wipe our tears away. He can fill us up.


Because he’s the definition of Love, always forgiving. LOVE never failing. Even if we fail him.


If I'm being honest, sometimes wrong things be feeling like the right things. I guess that's Society's way of living.


We’re broken people and indeed in need of a Savior. LOVE heals every wound. Knowing he is LOVE.