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Which statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of the passage?
Walking slowly around the living room, I glanced behind the curtains and then playfully peeked under each couch cushion.
A. It makes the narrator's character seem immature
B. It makes the story seem to detailed.
C. it makes the story feel more playful
D. it makes the story feel more stressful.