Respuesta :
It really depends on what kind of paper this is. If it is argumentative or emotional then it would be appropriate. If this is a term paper, it might not be as fitting. I'm an author and if you want me to read your hook paragraph I would be happy to.
Hope that helps.
Hope that helps.
Answer:
It all matters on the type of thing you are writing. Either way thou, I hope you have fun doing it