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Read the excerpt from Erika’s letter to her mayor, arguing that the city should improve its recycling program.

Imposing stricter recycling regulations would greatly benefit our city in many ways.

Which is the best revision of the underlined portion of the sentence?
would be a totally beneficial thing to do.
would be great and I’ll tell you why.
would be pretty great for our city for many reasons.
no change

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Greenleafable
Well, given that you didn't underline anything in the sentence, we cannot completely help you.
However, having read that sentence, I really wouldn't change anything - the sentence itself sounds very professional, academic, and formal, which is something that Erika wants to achieve, given that she is addressing the mayor about a serious issue. She should, however, move on to explain why she believes that is the case in the following sentences.
metchelle
Basing on the excerpt above taken from Erika's letter to her mayor, I can say that there is nothing that I would change in the sentence. This is because the sentence is properly constructed and the choice of words are also correct. I assume that the underlined portion here is "would greatly benefit our city in many ways." This portion is correctly stated or written. So my answer would be the last option: no change.

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