Read this story, which is in chronological order. Last May, I decided to swim a mile without stopping. I knew I would need to be able to do it to join the Coast Guard, so I spent every morning practicing with my father. I thought of giving up many times. "I could be sleeping right now," I would cry out as my muscles ached. One morning, I started to doubt myself, so I imagined swimming to a person in need. Before I knew it, I could hear my dad clapping. I had done it! Write a version of the same story, this time starting the story in the middle.

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Read this story, which is in chronological order. Last May, I decided to swim a mile without stopping. I knew I would need to be able to do it to join the Coast Guard, so I spent every morning practicing with my father. I thought of giving up many times. "I could be sleeping right now," I would cry out as my muscles ached. One morning, I started to doubt myself, so I imagined swimming to a person in need. Before I knew it, I could hear my dad clapping. I had done it! Write a version of the same story, this time starting the story in the middle.

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pmayl pmayl · Answer 1 · 2018-01-24T01:59:28+01:00

"I could be sleeping right now", I thought as I felt aches shoot down my arms and legs, struggling for breath with every stroke. I started to doubt myself, so I imagined swimming to a person in need.
Last May, I decided to swim a mile without stopping. I knew I would need to be able to do it to join the Coast Guard, so I spent every morning practicing with my father. I had wanted to give up so many times, including the day I succeeded.
Thinking of saving a drowning person pushed me forward. Before I knew it, I could hear my dad clapping. I had done it!

adioabiola adioabiola · Answer 2 · 2021-11-02T14:14:50+01:00

Version of the same story starting in the middle.

When the thought of giving up crossed my mind, then I started doubting myself that I couldn't do it but I imagined myself swimming to rescue a drowning person, then I heard Dad clapping, it was then I knew I had done it.

I practiced with my Dad every morning for so many days enduring so much muscle pains because I knew I needed to swim a mile without stopping to be able to join the coast guard. I have finally achieved my goal after practicing every morning when I should be sleeping. The sacrifice is really worth the achievement.