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The man put on his uniform. He went to the field with his teammates. The crowd cheered loudly. His coach told him to go on the field. The man took his place at the line. The snapper released the ball. The man ran to be open on the field

Rewrite the above excerpt using clauses to add variety and interest.

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The man in the locker room put on his uniform. He headed out to the field with the rest of his teammates, the crowd cheered loudly. The coach said it was his turn, so the man took his place at the line. The snapper snapped the ball, and the man ran to an open spot on the field.

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Answer:

The man, who had been sitting in the locker, put on his uniform. He went energetically to the field with his teammates. The crowd cheered for them loudly. His coach who has been viewing him from the start, told him that it was his turn to be on the field. The man, feeling so happy to be asked to play, went into the field and took his place. Once the snapper released the ball, the man ran to the open side of the field, managing to secure the first point for the team.

Explanation:

With the addition of new and suitable clauses, the new passage will be-

The man, who had been sitting in the locker, put on his uniform. He went energetically to the field with his teammates. The crowd cheered for them loudly. His coach who has been viewing him from the start, told him that it was his turn to be on the field. The man, feeling so happy to be asked to play, went into the field and took his place at the line. Once the snapper released the ball, the man ran to the open side of the field, managing to secure the first point for the team.

The bold italic underlined words are the added words to add variety and interest to the whole passage.